update two blog posts and banporn page

3 files changed, 23 insertions, 22 deletions

diff --git a/content/antiporn.md b/content/antiporn.md
index 64e7538..14d24e7 100644
--- a/content/antiporn.md
+++ b/content/antiporn.md
@@ -3,25 +3,30 @@ title: Ban Pornography
 date: 2025-11-11
 ---
 
+_This page is aimed at porn consumers (especially the ones trying to quit)._
 
 ## You are seeking help.
 
-You probably started watching porn by curiosity or because of someone around you, and since that day you consume this stuff. If you clicked on this `banporn` link, it must be because you want to quit porn.
+You probably started watching porn by curiosity or because of someone around you, and since that day you consume this stuff.
 
-If you think that you will never be able to live a normal life again, that it is impossible for you to escape porn, that's not true. You were tricked by this evil industry to think that pornography is 'normal' and that it's just some regular non-harmful 'habit'.
+If you think that you will never be able to live a normal life again, that it is impossible for you to escape porn, that's not true. Like many others you fell into the trap of a really evil industry.
 
-But you know it's not true. Don't let the X industry control you for the rest of your life, set yourself free, quit porn, [read](https://easypeasymethod.org) or [watch](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=27H4-pN8e9o) EasyPeasy.
+People/the porn industry will make you believe that pornography is 'normal' and that it's just some regular non-harmful 'habit', but you know that it's not true, you know that you don't really like this stuff.
+
+Please, don't let the X industry control you for the rest of your life, set yourself free.
+
+There is a book about a [painless method used to quit porn immediately without willpower or any sense of deprivation or sacrifice](https://easypeasymethod.org/) available for free on the internet. There is even [a video](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=27H4-pN8e9o) if you don't like reading.
 
 ## What will you gain from stopping porn ?
 
 - You will not lose hours a day searching for content to consume.
-- You respect women, men around you and yourself.
-- You are less prominent to sexual dysfunctions and adultery.
+- You will respect women and men around. You will respect yourself.
+- You are less likely to have sexual dysfunctions, or to commit adultery.
 - Life will feel easier as you will have a better tolerance to bad moments.
-- Life will feel better as you will be more sensible to dopamine
-- You won't have to hide your secret hobby as you won't have one
-- Crystal clear browsing history.
-- If someone asks you if you watch porn you will proudly reply that "no 🗿"
-- You will have a healthier relationship with your partner
+- Life will be better as you will be more sensible to dopamine.
+- You won't have to hide your secret hobby as you won't have one.
+- You will have a crystal clear browsing history.
+- If someone asks you if you watch porn you will proudly reply that "no 🗿".
+- You will have a healthier relationship with your partner.
 
 <a href="https://denshi.org/antiporn.html"><img src="https://denshi.org/banporn.png" alt="[BAN PORN]" style="inherit: false;"/></a>
diff --git a/content/blog/someone-emailed-me.md b/content/blog/someone-emailed-me.md
index edd35f3..85cd6f9 100644
--- a/content/blog/someone-emailed-me.md
+++ b/content/blog/someone-emailed-me.md
@@ -19,21 +19,17 @@ _(thank you for your email)_
 
 I really like to read blog posts from other people on the web. When you read about someone else's thoughts, you really listen to what **they** have to say, you can't really stop them to then start to talk about yourself like in a conversation. (+ blog is a great resource to learn things)
 
-When you read a blog, you are free to leave and return. You are not forced to hear about some stuff that you are not interested in. You are not stuck in a conversation that you don't like. **You** (lovely-little-thing browsing the web) make the call.
-
 I really think that having a blog is cool, you should have one. I host mine all by myself but I'm sure that there is another solution if you can't do that.
 
 I think that you already know this but : Don't write blogs about something that is illegal or to hurt someone else's feeling. Be kind to the people around, especially to people that you don't know.
 
-You can find a few links at the bottom of the [stuff](/stuff) page if you want to read other blog posts scattered all over the internet.
-
 ## Back to emails
 
-### Don't let 'mailto:' scare you
+### Don't let 'mailto:' links scare you
 
 I never leave comments on youtube videos, I never send emails to people that write blogs neither. But this email changed my mind. Why not after all ?
 
-You might see me in your inbox someday if I find **your** website.
+You might see me in your inbox someday if I find your website.
 
 ### XMPP
 
diff --git a/content/blog/trying-out-helix.md b/content/blog/trying-out-helix.md
index f7fd503..79fbc7b 100644
--- a/content/blog/trying-out-helix.md
+++ b/content/blog/trying-out-helix.md
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ alias hx="helix"
 
 Helix comes pre installed with LSP support, color schemes, a fuzzy finder similar to telescope, native syntax tree with tree sitter, auto closing characters such as brackets, parenthesis and quotes and more.
 
-Helix and [Neovim](https://neovim.io) feel different to me, because with Neovim, I spend more time making the **perfect** configuration instead of having work done. With Helix you have almost nothing to setup. Some people might say that compared to Neovim/Vim, Helix is bloated, but I really think that this 'bloat' feels awesome and will find it's own audience.
+Helix are different [Neovim](https://neovim.io) as helix works out of the box, you have nothing to configure. Some people might say that compared to Neovim/Vim, Helix is bloated, but I really think that this 'bloat' feels awesome and will find it's own audience.
 
 ### Conf
 
@@ -33,14 +33,14 @@ Helix uses a `config.toml` file in your `~/.config/helix` folder, so since it's
 
 ### Usage
 
-Of course, using Helix might be weird at first glance if you are used to vim motions.
+Of course, using Helix feels weird if you are used to vim motions.
 
-It uses an _object-verb_ system : you first specify the object, then the action you want to perform on it (yank, delete, replace etc). So you might feel a bit confused with the keybinds because vim does the opposite (verb-object). You should really go checkout helix's website as it gives you everything you need to help you use their text editor. They even have a guide [for us](https://docs.helix-editor.com/from-vim.html) vim users.
-
-After using Helix for roughly 5 mins, I can say that I feel more comfortable **learning** Helix rather than Neovim. The Keybindings make more sense and are more intuitive.
+It uses an _object-verb_ system : you first specify the object, then the action you want to perform on it (yank, delete, replace etc). So you will feel a bit confused with the keybinds because vim does the opposite (verb-object). You should really go checkout helix's website as it gives you everything you need to help you use their text editor. They even have a guide [for us](https://docs.helix-editor.com/from-vim.html) vim users.
 
 ## Conclusion
 
+After using Helix for roughly 5 mins, I can say that I feel more comfortable **learning** Helix rather than Neovim. The Keybindings make more sense and are more intuitive.
+
 You must have your own opinion on the subject, stop reading stupid blog posts about helix and just give it a shot :)
 
-If you want to see my helix and neovim config here are my [dot files](https://codeberg.org/mielota/dox/src/branch/main/home/.config)
+If you want to see my helix and neovim config here are my [dotfiles](https://codeberg.org/mielota/dox/src/branch/main/home/.config)